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How to Feature Common College Application Themes

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Theme #1: Relationships

 

One example of an effective application theme is relationships. For example, you might want your application to showcase your fascination with how relationships work and how this affects your values. 

 

If this is the case, you might write an essay about how your experience coaching youth soccer gave you a passion for teaching and reflecting on how helping children learn these skills was extremely rewarding. However, if you are more interested in psychology, you might discuss how you are fascinated by observing the psychology of different people and learning about how this impacts the way they interact in their relationships. 

 

Theme #2: Family

 

Another example of a possible application theme is the theme of family. If you have a tight-knit family, you might use this theme to focus on how close your family is despite your differences and struggles. 

 

Your essay might highlight how a relationship with a beloved grandparent has affected you and your values. Another strong essay under this theme might compare your relationship with this grandparent to a mentoring relationship or experience. Such essays would give your application a personal touch by highlighting your experiences and strong family values while also connecting these to your passions.

 

Theme #3: Effort

 

Another application theme that you can use is effort and perseverance. Sometimes hard work can be its own reward, and it is valuable to show admissions officers that you recognize this. An application theme that is centered on effort might showcase your experience working with an organization such as Habitat for Humanity. 

 

In your essay, you might describe how seeing so many people working hard to help others was extremely rewarding and had influenced your career goals. 

 

Theme #4: Leadership

 

One final application theme is leadership. This can be a very strong application theme because many colleges are passionate about recruiting students who are leaders within their schools and communities. 

 

For application with the theme of leadership, you might showcase your passion for social justice by writing an essay about your participation in an organization which aims to help underserved populations, such as refugees, people with disabilities, or other marginalized populations. 

 

How to Write an Essay that Highlights Your Application Theme

 

The best application themes and essays create a powerful narrative. They should be able to be applied to multiple elements of a student’s school and personal life, and the student should be able to reflect on how these experiences have affected their values and future goals. 

 

To understand if your essay is strong enough, we recommend using our Peer Essay Review tool, where you can get a free review of your essay from another student. You can also improve your own writing skills by reviewing other students’ essays. This tool will make it easier to understand your essay’s strengths and weaknesses, and help you make your writing even more compelling.

 


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