Wellesley College Essay Example by an Accepted Student

 

Wellesley College is a pretty selective school, so it’s important to write strong essays to help your application stand out. In this post, we’ll share an essay a real student has submitted to Wellesley College. (Names and identifying information have been changed, but all other details are preserved).

 

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Example

 

Prompt: When choosing a college community, you are choosing an intellectual community and a place where you believe that you can live, learn, and flourish. We know that there are more than 100 reasons to choose Wellesley, but it’s a good place to start. Visit the Wellesley 100 and select two items that attract, inspire, or energize you. Have fun with this and use this opportunity to reflect personally on what items appeal to you most and why. Please limit your response to the Wellesley College essay to two well-developed paragraphs (minimum 250 words, maximum 400 words).


 

In my sophomore year, I was the only Hispanic person in my IB HL Math 1 course and one of the few Latinas who took IB English Literature, IB Chem 2, and more. As an IB student, looking different from my peers and teachers, it is easy to feel alone in my core classes. To combat this, I’ve strived to find a sense of community in my extracurriculars and electivesprimarily art and culture-based. I am eager to attend Wellesley for this same sense of community. Wellesley’s vast multicultural organizations, particularly Mezcla, listed in reason #8: Culture shows, excite me. It is comforting to know I will have a community of peers to bond with over a shared Latinx identity. I know Mezcla will be a second family to me. 

 

I also look forward to the first-year seminars, listed in reason #13. Introspective, seminar-style courses are something I am already familiar with as my Theory of Knowledge class is structured the same way. It is my favorite class because I can interact with my peers in a setting where we learn from one another and contemplate how we know what we claim to know. It differs from traditional classroom lessons as there is an element of trust involved; students need to feel like our discussions are safe spaces where everyone’s ideas are heard. It has allowed me to know my peers and teachers on a deeper level. I knew I wanted to go to a school that would allow me to experience this again with seminars that fit my interests. I would love to take Can We Have An Argument? to develop the communicative skills that will benefit me for the rest of my life, and 21st Century Cinema, to expand on my love of the visual arts and explore film. 

 

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